Category: Writers Block
So, listening to the conversations in my AP english class, I picked out random sentences, phraises I heard and made them into a poem. It actually went rather well.
I don't think we are this Far
3-3-08
See there's more to it, this is a quiz
it's kind of interesting, kind of weird
should tell him not to curse...
argument was probably the best.
"Up high, yes"
"it wasn't until June"
it's a requiem, something like that every time I'm there
but the thing of it is, I'm scared
I wonder too.
I kind of do, but I don't want a kid to go through that.
I would never wish, on anybody.
Seriously, I've got to figure out.
Why don't we do it today at 1:15?
That's another reason his parents won't deal with it.
It's rediculus.
We need an intervention.
Don't let me forget,
cause there's some kind of chemical.
Well it's me, that's all you need.
I love these kind of poems you write. It's very clever how you can just use random fraises you have heard and piece them together to make such a thought provoking piece of writing such as This.
Don't ever stop writing.
That is just interesting, I'd like to do that some time. It's a cool poem.
I admit, I don't know anything about how to appreciate poetry, unless perhaps it's humorous or satirical, but I kind of like this. It's sort of like what audio artists do with tapes, cutting and splicing bits of this and that to make a collage.
Cala,
You have a unique and gifted mind. Keep it up.
Hugs,
Thom